Conflicted love
Conflicted emotions one may experience when in love5 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Hayes
Whoooo-oooo! Nice one! That said all it needed to say but with some fire in it! "Bottoms up, without crying"- LOVE THIS. Been there, and hope that poison mever tadtes so good again, lol. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Whoooo-oooo! Nice one! That said all it needed to say but with some fire in it! "Bottoms up, without crying"- LOVE THIS. Been there, and hope that poison mever tadtes so good again, lol. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you Nicki:)) I appreciate it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Emotions Poetry Contest. Very well put. Conflicted emotions describes love perfectly. Or as Def Leppard is known to say: Love Bites! The only suggesting I would make might be a personal one. I think you might increase the font size just a bit for those of us with old peepers. lol But it's all personal choice. Nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the Emotions Poetry Contest. Very well put. Conflicted emotions describes love perfectly. Or as Def Leppard is known to say: Love Bites! The only suggesting I would make might be a personal one. I think you might increase the font size just a bit for those of us with old peepers. lol But it's all personal choice. Nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you Marilyn. I?ll increase font size:))
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another free verse, this time for the 'emotions' prompt. A very forthright demand to choose between the writer or the lover. A very worthy entry. The only suggestion: no need to put the title in the text box. In fact they advise against it. The title is well displayed above and sometimes (where there's a syllable count) you can be disqualified. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Another free verse, this time for the 'emotions' prompt. A very forthright demand to choose between the writer or the lover. A very worthy entry. The only suggestion: no need to put the title in the text box. In fact they advise against it. The title is well displayed above and sometimes (where there's a syllable count) you can be disqualified. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Oooh. Good to know. Thank you Debbie:))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When falling for someone who is selfish, we soon find out that we are left out in the cold and your strong and powerful words here tell a tale of betrayal in love here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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When falling for someone who is selfish, we soon find out that we are left out in the cold and your strong and powerful words here tell a tale of betrayal in love here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you Dolly. I?m glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is an emotional Poem contest entry.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This is an emotional Poem contest entry.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you Doc:) I appreciate it.
