Butterfly
10-7-6 Busso poem27 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
Anyone who doubts or questions the creator's skilled artworks, need only look at the butterfly, a carefully tended garden, the beautiful night sky, or even just glance at the beauty of you and I.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Anyone who doubts or questions the creator's skilled artworks, need only look at the butterfly, a carefully tended garden, the beautiful night sky, or even just glance at the beauty of you and I.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you verymuch
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a beautiful poem and presentation. It reminds me of a mini-series several years ago on TV, Under the Dome. Much of the plot was focused on the monarch butterfly. It wasn't what I normally watch but it was thought provoking and symbolic. Well done.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This is a beautiful poem and presentation. It reminds me of a mini-series several years ago on TV, Under the Dome. Much of the plot was focused on the monarch butterfly. It wasn't what I normally watch but it was thought provoking and symbolic. Well done.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for dropping by.
Comment from jessizero
You got the syllable count right. It's always tricky with "blessed," since it is usually pronounced with one syllable but it can be pronounced with two. I was impressed by your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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You got the syllable count right. It's always tricky with "blessed," since it is usually pronounced with one syllable but it can be pronounced with two. I was impressed by your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much .Yes bless-ed is a bit stick ,some swearing it is 'bless'd'
Comment from royowen
There's something quite amazing about creation, the Master of artistry, the one who shapes mountains, the shore lines, the Beauty of a butterfly, or the idiosyncratic spiders and insects, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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There's something quite amazing about creation, the Master of artistry, the one who shapes mountains, the shore lines, the Beauty of a butterfly, or the idiosyncratic spiders and insects, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much,Roy .God bless!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for participating in the Japanese club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you for participating in the Japanese club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Nature sure is amazing. Whether it is a he or she or both I know in my heart that she rules the roost with a gentle hand and gives of herself whenever someone needs a lift.
Thanks for sharing this nature versus nurture poem.
Jesse
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Nature sure is amazing. Whether it is a he or she or both I know in my heart that she rules the roost with a gentle hand and gives of herself whenever someone needs a lift.
Thanks for sharing this nature versus nurture poem.
Jesse
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
short powerful poem about the monarch butterfly and its ethereal beauty you captured the form nicely I like the last line you are the blessed one the image chosen aptly illustrates the poem
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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short powerful poem about the monarch butterfly and its ethereal beauty you captured the form nicely I like the last line you are the blessed one the image chosen aptly illustrates the poem
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem.the butterfly is beautiful. I have never heard about this type of butterfly. I like the words you used and the color you used for the background . Very good job!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem.the butterfly is beautiful. I have never heard about this type of butterfly. I like the words you used and the color you used for the background . Very good job!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from SimianSavant
I like what you did here with the white text shadowing on the black text. To make this really pop, I suggest changing your background color to the darker reddish-orange on the monarch's wings. Give it a try and see what you think!
Thanks for the read,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I like what you did here with the white text shadowing on the black text. To make this really pop, I suggest changing your background color to the darker reddish-orange on the monarch's wings. Give it a try and see what you think!
Thanks for the read,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Thanks for the suggestion . I will try that..
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Sanku,
This poem fits the prompt well and is about my favorite butterfly.
The king/queen of their kind.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Hi Sanku,
This poem fits the prompt well and is about my favorite butterfly.
The king/queen of their kind.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your weekend
Joan
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much
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Don't mention it, Sanku.
Joan
