Gun Fun 1-6-1
fun with gun, need to run from the guns3 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
I like that you made your poem rhyme, and the rhyme scheme is good. The art work selected goes well with the piece. I'm a bit confused by the second line.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I like that you made your poem rhyme, and the rhyme scheme is good. The art work selected goes well with the piece. I'm a bit confused by the second line.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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just a play on words and noting that for many sick people having a gun and using it to kill people can be considered fun while everyone else need to run for their lives
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I understand now - thank you.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poem contest. You said alot with your eight syllables and ended it with a bang. So to speak. This should do well in the contest and I wish you luck. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poem contest. You said alot with your eight syllables and ended it with a bang. So to speak. This should do well in the contest and I wish you luck. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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thanks
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your powerful sentiments in this 1-6-1 capture the mixed emotion generated by guns: on the one hand, appearing exciting and daring; on the other, dangerous and to be avoided. A topical subject that always needs to be reiterated. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Your powerful sentiments in this 1-6-1 capture the mixed emotion generated by guns: on the one hand, appearing exciting and daring; on the other, dangerous and to be avoided. A topical subject that always needs to be reiterated. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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thanks as always