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It was lost!

2 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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This was a great poem! I liked that you rhymed the first two lines. It made the last line pop out as it surprised the reader. You got the syllable count right, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This was a great poem! I liked that you rhymed the first two lines. It made the last line pop out as it surprised the reader. You got the syllable count right, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Your review popped up twice! Thank you!