Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

I hope that's not little Fritz escaped from the Cincinnati Zoo. Great terrifying AI hippo pic. All he needs for motivation to charge is a political t-shirt for any candidate other than Harambe.

I'm not totally sold on the background color but it's passable, and the font works well.

Regards,

Harambe (for President)

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

What color do you think?? Everything was coming up pastel-y and I wasn't happy.

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Alright I went with pinkish mud. :-)
Thanks for the review and I love the idea to use Ms. Hippo as a political weapon!

reply by SimianSavant on 13-Mar-2024

Oh I like that. It really brings out Fritz's eyes and makes him more terrifying. Good choice.

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

I really liked this poem. Your photo you used is perfectly fitting in line with your words. The hippo is quite a fascinating creature. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks so much!

Comment from Baltimore Born

Exceptional

WowWee. Is that a fearful looking creature! I can't imagine swimming into him/her in the swamp. Your 5-5-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Good title and picture for this poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks so much for lovin' up on my sweet hippo! :-)
And than you for the spectacular rating!

reply by Baltimore Born on 13-Mar-2024

You're welcome. Nice overall presentation.