Caged
Betrayal in rhyme3 total reviews
Comment from Helvi2
Hi JewelI remember way back when someone deceived you by making you believe he was single. He even wrote you poetry. This poem describes the hurt one can cause by trying to deceive another. Your words spoke volumes! One never needs pain like this! Love the image you created and added! The poor woman looks lost! Fantastic job of putting deceit into words with rhyme no less! Nice to know you found someone who is special! :o) Nancy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Hi JewelI remember way back when someone deceived you by making you believe he was single. He even wrote you poetry. This poem describes the hurt one can cause by trying to deceive another. Your words spoke volumes! One never needs pain like this! Love the image you created and added! The poor woman looks lost! Fantastic job of putting deceit into words with rhyme no less! Nice to know you found someone who is special! :o) Nancy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you sweet friend. Sadly, I wrote this for my husband. We may recover but it?s slow right now. :(
Comment from gramalot8
Your readers can definitely feel the pain and hurt this person feels from your descriptive words. Great rhyme and rhythm throughout as well. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Your readers can definitely feel the pain and hurt this person feels from your descriptive words. Great rhyme and rhythm throughout as well. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Sally Law
First, Im not sure how I've missed you for so long, Jewel. I'm blind and miss a lot, I guess. Anyway, I've been here since 2018 and recognize your name. Welcome back if that applies.
Now, this poem is FABULOUS, as well as your art. How talented you are! From the poem I gather you've moved on to greener pastures and are freer than ever.
Sending you a virtual six and blessing for your writing endeavors. Please, come again!
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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First, Im not sure how I've missed you for so long, Jewel. I'm blind and miss a lot, I guess. Anyway, I've been here since 2018 and recognize your name. Welcome back if that applies.
Now, this poem is FABULOUS, as well as your art. How talented you are! From the poem I gather you've moved on to greener pastures and are freer than ever.
Sending you a virtual six and blessing for your writing endeavors. Please, come again!
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Well, this poem is very fresh. Sadly.
We will see how it goes.
I haven?t posted in awhile! I need to start posting again!!
Thanks. I will check out your work as well!