Grieving Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Waiting for You "My sad Heart emoting @utilizing it's 'Heart-Brain'
4 total reviews
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Oh my goodness, Ricky, this is beautiful writing. You have a true gift. I can relate to this poem so much it made me cry.
I have nothing to critique.
This: WOW
I will be there
Yes, no matter how hard.
No matter how high the sky.
The Stars that I need to see...
Or how blind I am to you and me.
...
I want to stand by you on the mountain.
The many particles of sand to count.
How hot the desert where I stand.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Oh my goodness, Ricky, this is beautiful writing. You have a true gift. I can relate to this poem so much it made me cry.
I have nothing to critique.
This: WOW
I will be there
Yes, no matter how hard.
No matter how high the sky.
The Stars that I need to see...
Or how blind I am to you and me.
...
I want to stand by you on the mountain.
The many particles of sand to count.
How hot the desert where I stand.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the tremendous review in the six stars Jewel.
To be truly appreciated for one's intellect level and no matter whatever field is a great honor.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from Mia Twysted
That was a very beautiful piece. It flowed like a gentle river as I read through it. It made me fill with love and happiness knowing with the one I love standing right there beside me as I stand beside them.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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That was a very beautiful piece. It flowed like a gentle river as I read through it. It made me fill with love and happiness knowing with the one I love standing right there beside me as I stand beside them.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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To be truly appreciated with one's work here at this site is not only a blessing but a miracle in disguise!
Thanks Mia,
Richard
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Being in love always makes for good poetry. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading and couldn't find any way to improve it. This is a good write.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Being in love always makes for good poetry. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading and couldn't find any way to improve it. This is a good write.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thanks again Barbara for reviewing this one and it's good I didn't have to correct!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
Another fantastic piece concerning your new love and relationship! Is she out now? Hopefully. Keep up the great writing, my friend.
Love sure is fertile ground for poetry!
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Another fantastic piece concerning your new love and relationship! Is she out now? Hopefully. Keep up the great writing, my friend.
Love sure is fertile ground for poetry!
D
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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He's right now sleeping as I'm writing this in a bathtub
Extremely worried because I have a massive undertaking to do today.
I don't sweat the small stuff.
Thank you Douglas
Doctor Ricky
