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A poem I wrote when I was down6 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
I'm sure the response this attracts will assure you, the Good Lord is really listening. This is spiritual, it is honest, and most of all it is a display of absolute trust. I have no doubt it will attract response. Just remember, not every response will be positive.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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I'm sure the response this attracts will assure you, the Good Lord is really listening. This is spiritual, it is honest, and most of all it is a display of absolute trust. I have no doubt it will attract response. Just remember, not every response will be positive.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you Bob.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We have our moments when we feel distressed and upset and our faith sees us through Justin. I hope you are feeling relaxed just now. The chaos in the world sometimes affects our mood and our personal circumstances can also be the cause of stress, a poignant write and many will identify with your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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We have our moments when we feel distressed and upset and our faith sees us through Justin. I hope you are feeling relaxed just now. The chaos in the world sometimes affects our mood and our personal circumstances can also be the cause of stress, a poignant write and many will identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a beautifully well-written poem. Your words express emotion so that he reader feels some of what you were feeling. Never let go of God's hand. You can get through those feelings when they come. Pray and set those prayers to paper. Writing can bring a change in your self perception. You obviously have a gift. Be willing to use it. Very well done.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is a beautifully well-written poem. Your words express emotion so that he reader feels some of what you were feeling. Never let go of God's hand. You can get through those feelings when they come. Pray and set those prayers to paper. Writing can bring a change in your self perception. You obviously have a gift. Be willing to use it. Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank- you Marilyn.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked your poem. Trust in God and he will help you. I get days like this when I am depressed. This world is not easy to deal with. The rhyming was
Good in your poem. Very good job
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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I liked your poem. Trust in God and he will help you. I get days like this when I am depressed. This world is not easy to deal with. The rhyming was
Good in your poem. Very good job
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank- you Brenda.
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a truly heartfelt poem, reaching for the heart of God. Your answers are already there, your prayers are already answered. He has redeemed us for eternity with him. But he also understands the trials of life and wants you to reach out to him, as you have done in this poem.
I just wasn't sure if in this line you meant to have both think and see there:
To know that He doesn't think see me
Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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This is a truly heartfelt poem, reaching for the heart of God. Your answers are already there, your prayers are already answered. He has redeemed us for eternity with him. But he also understands the trials of life and wants you to reach out to him, as you have done in this poem.
I just wasn't sure if in this line you meant to have both think and see there:
To know that He doesn't think see me
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you Julie
Comment from mrsmajor
You have started out perfectly, Justin, and a Prayer to Almighty God will be answered...I understand, for there has been moments of sadness for me as well...but my humble Prayers was answered...
look in the mirror, and smile...say thank you Father, and smile again...See how easy that was!...God loves You, if no one else does...Be Blessed...
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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You have started out perfectly, Justin, and a Prayer to Almighty God will be answered...I understand, for there has been moments of sadness for me as well...but my humble Prayers was answered...
look in the mirror, and smile...say thank you Father, and smile again...See how easy that was!...God loves You, if no one else does...Be Blessed...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you Victoria.
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You're very welcome, it was my pleasure...Feel better, God loves You...
Victoria
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Thank you Victoria.