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Ode to Winter

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Comment from lyenochka
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We typically think of winter as white and colorless but you bring out the colors of a winter sunset in your 5-7-5. I especially liked the alliteration and consonance of "sun sets sky is painted ". Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Great review zanya
Comment from kahpot
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This is a wonderful ode to winter, love your chosen artwork, as your words do paint the image of the changing skies, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Great review zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A very nice example for the ode to Winter 5-7-5 writing prompt. There is nothing more beautiful that a vibrant sunset reflecting off of the white snow. You captured the feeling with your words and the phoe you used brings the concept all together. Nice work.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Thanks for reading and sharing zanya