Warmth
A winter wonderland.3 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
I am reviewing my early votes as I had not taken the guidelines this is good and requires no changes so should have been a five.That is really lovely a good entry to the 5-7-5 competition; I was too late to vote. My only concern is the picture far out weighs your wonderful words, Since the picture is a good size perhaps enlarge the words to bring it into balance.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I am reviewing my early votes as I had not taken the guidelines this is good and requires no changes so should have been a five.That is really lovely a good entry to the 5-7-5 competition; I was too late to vote. My only concern is the picture far out weighs your wonderful words, Since the picture is a good size perhaps enlarge the words to bring it into balance.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from jessizero
I liked the contrast of chilly outside with inside warmth. "Bright Christmas lights show" was the perfect way to end the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I liked the contrast of chilly outside with inside warmth. "Bright Christmas lights show" was the perfect way to end the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from jim vecchio
You're getting me cold and in search of a warm blanket. Very well done! This may make it to the top. Ironic to have this contest just as Spring is approaching.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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You're getting me cold and in search of a warm blanket. Very well done! This may make it to the top. Ironic to have this contest just as Spring is approaching.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thanks, it is deeply appreciated.
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I hope your poem gets a WARM reception!
