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Wintertime

Winter on ice.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. Good complimentary picture. Nice job.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you!
reply by Baltimore Born on 09-Mar-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
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You did a good job describing the cold of winter in this 5-7-5 poem. Your syllable count was correct, and the last line wrapped things up perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much!