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Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderful song "rise up" is, and a beautiful haiku you have written, your last line is so moving, as we can picture these plants as they come into view, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Sunflowers sure do rise and tend to be very majestic when they do. Thank you for sharing this tribute to probably a very underrated flower. Roses and such normally get the glory, of course, the lotus flower has been getting some notoriety lately on FanStory. I had fun reading.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka
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That's a wonderful way to rejoice - with "soulful exaltation"! And I hope we can all do that remembering all our blessings. And sunflowers remind me of Ukraine. May God give them freedom and victory over Russia!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Poor angels in Ukraine... they are not in the news but the war continues... so sad. I going your prayer for their peace and freedom.

    Thank you, big sister. I hope you are having a great weekend.

    Love

    Marival

Comment from GWHARGIS
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Sunflowers are the Norwegians of flowers. Big, tall and bold. They speak of joy and resilience. I liked the imagery of the growth of the sunflower. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is beautifully worded it is presented beautifully, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful weekend, and God bless. Patricia .

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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nice song - you used the title well for your rise up haiku

the second pic is way cool - almost makes me like sunflowers (almost lol)
never really cared for them...

anyway, a great poem with good imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs