2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "My Woeful Heart"x
13 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You continued with your tone of woe very well throughout with this SENRYU. Your carefully and creatively chosen words show deep sadness within the moonless sky.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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You continued with your tone of woe very well throughout with this SENRYU. Your carefully and creatively chosen words show deep sadness within the moonless sky.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Verna. 😊
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely Senryu poem. Comparing the broken heart to a setting sun is a good visual. The artwork you chose and the colors of the background and font are exquisite. Very well done.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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A lovely Senryu poem. Comparing the broken heart to a setting sun is a good visual. The artwork you chose and the colors of the background and font are exquisite. Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you 😊
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The picture is wonderful. I worship Pinterest. I enjoy your complete lesson, You talk clearly and without any retention. As I have mentioned, others are taking up your baton and are doing so as well. Thank you. Good work all around. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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The picture is wonderful. I worship Pinterest. I enjoy your complete lesson, You talk clearly and without any retention. As I have mentioned, others are taking up your baton and are doing so as well. Thank you. Good work all around. Karen
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Ulla
Yes, unanswered love can feel like if your whole being is ripped apart. It has to be experienced to be felt, and you describe it so very well in your poem Marival. Un besito, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Yes, unanswered love can feel like if your whole being is ripped apart. It has to be experienced to be felt, and you describe it so very well in your poem Marival. Un besito, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Just the title of this poem made me want to reach out and give you a gigantic hug. Then reading it my desire to comfort you was even greater. Here's a HUGE VIRTUAL HUG!!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Just the title of this poem made me want to reach out and give you a gigantic hug. Then reading it my desire to comfort you was even greater. Here's a HUGE VIRTUAL HUG!!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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BIG HUG FOR YOU TOO. I love hugs. (*÷*) ❤️
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. The lines "my woeful heart laments dusk's dying of the light" stood out to me. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. The lines "my woeful heart laments dusk's dying of the light" stood out to me. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
One great discouraging factor is the tyranny of distance, it is a great dampener, but worst than that is the cooling of one's ardour, that's really bad in the long, we'll done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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One great discouraging factor is the tyranny of distance, it is a great dampener, but worst than that is the cooling of one's ardour, that's really bad in the long, we'll done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Most welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
This had such angst to it. The nothingness of being in love. It's as if the narrator knows the universe goes on whether there is love or not. An infinite number of stars, a moonless sky all echo the longing of the heart. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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This had such angst to it. The nothingness of being in love. It's as if the narrator knows the universe goes on whether there is love or not. An infinite number of stars, a moonless sky all echo the longing of the heart. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you for understanding, I appreciate your exceptional and insightful review.
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Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, missing or lost love always makes the night so very hard, as it brings on loneliness as well, an excellent suite of senryu's, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Beautiful, missing or lost love always makes the night so very hard, as it brings on loneliness as well, an excellent suite of senryu's, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Gorgeous words and colorful image. This poem tells us a story of a long-distance relationship. But the heart lingers and lingers until time is of the essence. They no longer remain.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Gorgeous words and colorful image. This poem tells us a story of a long-distance relationship. But the heart lingers and lingers until time is of the essence. They no longer remain.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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