Not It
This is wrong on so many levels.9 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in theme and imagery based on a "just for fun" 5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Note: This is not a contest entry it does not benefit the writer except for the satisfaction of sharing.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This was well written rich in theme and imagery based on a "just for fun" 5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Note: This is not a contest entry it does not benefit the writer except for the satisfaction of sharing.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Doc. I laughed my butt off when I came up with that last line. I may have been the only one as it crashed and burnt, passing into the night with no more than a whimper.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a hilarious poem. This is creative and a little intimate. Smacking a butt? kissing, too? Don't do ugly? Are you speaking about the butt or the person's face? or the personality?
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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What a hilarious poem. This is creative and a little intimate. Smacking a butt? kissing, too? Don't do ugly? Are you speaking about the butt or the person's face? or the personality?
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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That?s the beauty of it. You decide ;). As long as you laughed I ll take that as the win!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This poem may be wrong on many levels but I happen to live on those levels and I found it dang funny. LOL A very humorous 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for sharing and for the laugh.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This poem may be wrong on many levels but I happen to live on those levels and I found it dang funny. LOL A very humorous 5-7-5 poem. Thanks for sharing and for the laugh.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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If you laughed then I already won. Victory!
Comment from teafor2
Unknown bard, this is quite satirical on "so many levels." It is humorous
while boasting and boosting the ego of author of I got you! What kind of
retort could be forth coming from the other side...It better top this. teafor2
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Unknown bard, this is quite satirical on "so many levels." It is humorous
while boasting and boosting the ego of author of I got you! What kind of
retort could be forth coming from the other side...It better top this. teafor2
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Ha! As long as you laughed. I know I did.
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Ha! As long as you laughed. I know I did.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Too cute, mystery poet!! You did manage my smile in your 17 syllables. It was too cute. It wasn't where I saw it going, hehe. I thought someone was about to get hit, then whaam, we got it with the punch line.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Too cute, mystery poet!! You did manage my smile in your 17 syllables. It was too cute. It wasn't where I saw it going, hehe. I thought someone was about to get hit, then whaam, we got it with the punch line.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Contest smontest! If you smiled, Rhonda, then I already won. I laughed too.
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Good!!
Comment from royowen
I'd rather define what's good compared to not good, but in the case of humans it's more about who wants to be good, rather than who is, the bad tend to wear masks, well done, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I'd rather define what's good compared to not good, but in the case of humans it's more about who wants to be good, rather than who is, the bad tend to wear masks, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Ha! Just having a little fun, Roy.
Comment from Gunner Lil
This made me laugh. It made my girlfriend laugh.
If it doesn't make a whole lot of others laugh---they're dead.
Good luck and thank you! Great picture too!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This made me laugh. It made my girlfriend laugh.
If it doesn't make a whole lot of others laugh---they're dead.
Good luck and thank you! Great picture too!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you! Lots of good ones in this contest, but If you guys laughed, I?m already a winner!!!
Comment from Natureschild
This certainly made me giggle and I enjoyed reading it. Your choice of words, especially 'ugly' was so unexpected, it surprised me. I guess that's what made it funny. You nailed the brief, well done!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This certainly made me giggle and I enjoyed reading it. Your choice of words, especially 'ugly' was so unexpected, it surprised me. I guess that's what made it funny. You nailed the brief, well done!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you! Lots of good ones in this contest, but If you laughed, I?m already a winner!!!
Comment from jessizero
This was definitely a funny 5-7-5. I also liked your author's notes when you say she must have a great personality. You got the syllable count right, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This was definitely a funny 5-7-5. I also liked your author's notes when you say she must have a great personality. You got the syllable count right, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you! Lots of good ones in this contest, but If you laughed, I?m already a winner!!!