Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Yes, it seems as if most of the people we meet are so wrapped up in themselves that hardly anyone else even exists. We live in a me me world. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-May-2024

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reply by the author on 10-May-2024

❤️x

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Oooooh!!! Now, THIS is excellent. I don't think it's "funny;" I think it's absolutely BRILLIANT!! I'm so going to use this - but I'll say, "As one of my FS writer friends says..." first.

Good luck in the contest, Mystery Philosopher!!
xoxox

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024

Thanks Rachelle.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

"that are wrapped up" might work better as "who are wrapped up" but I am not sure. It is, of course, up to you. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

I think you are right. I wasn?t sure which one to put. I?ve changed it. Thanks.

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

I think you are right. I wasn?t sure which one to put. I?ve changed it. Thanks.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

haha. I thought this was very creative. I like how you ended it with "overdressed". What a creative take on an old expression. Nice job with the poem including the image you shared. Loved it.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

I love your reviews. Thank you so much