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Grandads Noise Garden.

Sonic emissions of a silly Senior (me!)

3 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
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Yes this is an entertaining write - amazing what can be said, so effectively and in so few words and by using verbs essentially and what a great pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Many thanks, Zanya.
Comment from papa55mike
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This great-grandpa makes all of those noises getting out of bed and worse during the day. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    So kind, Mike. God Bless you too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile as there are some creaking bones and squeaky creaking going on in this old gentleman, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Dolly.