Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. Ants are determined and well organized. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024

Thank you. Often, I have fun trying my hand at shorter poems.

Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

Great rhyming schematic and image. One opportunity I see for improvement: the word "do". It's a weird word in the English language and it's overly percussive, disrupting your poetic flow. I suggest: "working ants WILL go", or "off to work ants go"

Regards,

Harambe (for President)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

Thank you! I will take your suggestion! I appreciate it!

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem. Love the ants and the picture. It gave me a big smile. Very good job. I also like the video. I remember this song. Ants are hard workers.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

Thank you! You are an "easy" reviewer, whose words I welcome!

reply by Brenda Strauser on 08-Mar-2024

I think it doesn't help if you we are negative about a post. We all need to hear uplifting, positive comments.

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

I know I do! But, if you really have a gripe about any of my posts, I would like to know.

reply by Brenda Strauser on 08-Mar-2024

I will tell you

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024

Many thanks! I appreciate it!