From the Murky Waters
Haiku15 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
It's an absolutely beautiful flower picture. Where did you get it from? It wasn't mentioned in the author's notes. The poem is also very lovely. How do you get the illumination behind the letters? That is quite striking. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
It's an absolutely beautiful flower picture. Where did you get it from? It wasn't mentioned in the author's notes. The poem is also very lovely. How do you get the illumination behind the letters? That is quite striking. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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The picture was the one given by the club page . I am not sure about the illumination .I put advance editor and choose bigger font (because many here have repeatedly requested for bigger font ) the letters come like this...
Comment from A.Myers85
A gorgeous image to accompany a superb Haiku. I'll admit the picture caught my interest first, but your poem stayed with me. I love the multiple layers in your words--something so beautiful blooming from the darkest, murkiest depths. Fantastic job!!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
A gorgeous image to accompany a superb Haiku. I'll admit the picture caught my interest first, but your poem stayed with me. I love the multiple layers in your words--something so beautiful blooming from the darkest, murkiest depths. Fantastic job!!!!!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for this honour. I am sorry My reply was delayed..
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a very good poem for it.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-The vivid imagery paints a good word picture
with "murky depths" and "pristine bloom."
-A very good closing line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a very good poem for it.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-The vivid imagery paints a good word picture
with "murky depths" and "pristine bloom."
-A very good closing line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Begin Again
How beautiful!
Your poem reminds us that we are not destined to drown in our troubles and sorrows, but rise again and flourish beneath the graces of our Lord.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
How beautiful!
Your poem reminds us that we are not destined to drown in our troubles and sorrows, but rise again and flourish beneath the graces of our Lord.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much,Carol.--santha
Comment from GWHARGIS
A lotus flower is such a beautiful flower. Like a floating vessel holding hope. In Richmond where I grew up, we had a Japanese garden. There were koi ponds, bridges and lotus on the ponds. Beautiful. Like escaping reality for the time you walk it. This was a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
A lotus flower is such a beautiful flower. Like a floating vessel holding hope. In Richmond where I grew up, we had a Japanese garden. There were koi ponds, bridges and lotus on the ponds. Beautiful. Like escaping reality for the time you walk it. This was a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by...
Comment from lyenochka
I love your contrast of "murky" vs "pristine" and the added "flushed by Sun's graces" to show the additional beauty and color in the lotus flowers. Great poem for the club. Good to see you posting. Hope you are feeling better. ð???ð???
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
I love your contrast of "murky" vs "pristine" and the added "flushed by Sun's graces" to show the additional beauty and color in the lotus flowers. Great poem for the club. Good to see you posting. Hope you are feeling better. ð???ð???
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Helen .sorry for such delayed reply.Some days i feel It is getter but some days it is back to square one..
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These lotus flowers are beautiful and you brought their faces to the sun here in your short poem, a magical post for the club, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
These lotus flowers are beautiful and you brought their faces to the sun here in your short poem, a magical post for the club, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much ,
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written 575 for the club event and I wish you the very great success with all of your writing. May you have a blessed day and a very good weekend. Patricia .
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
This is a very well written 575 for the club event and I wish you the very great success with all of your writing. May you have a blessed day and a very good weekend. Patricia .
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Lotus Flower Haiku club entry with us. It's a beautifully written poem for a tribute to this beautiful flower. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Thank you for sharing this Lotus Flower Haiku club entry with us. It's a beautifully written poem for a tribute to this beautiful flower. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
Outstanding, beauty can appear anywhere. Your poem is simple, yet powerful. It reminds me of when I lived in Brooklyn, NY, all the beautiful murals painted on walls. So many lessons to be learned from nature.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Outstanding, beauty can appear anywhere. Your poem is simple, yet powerful. It reminds me of when I lived in Brooklyn, NY, all the beautiful murals painted on walls. So many lessons to be learned from nature.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.