From Water I Come
The first living organism7 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Mrs. Preston should be flattered! Tough enough to write this form and make any kind of full theme flesh out. Coming up with an eight-syllable word for the second line is a baby step short of impossible!
(Not to mention it's been a long time since my biology classes so thanks for the word which I've now learned means: "relating to the hypothetical origin of living organisms from non-living matter")
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Mrs. Preston should be flattered! Tough enough to write this form and make any kind of full theme flesh out. Coming up with an eight-syllable word for the second line is a baby step short of impossible!
(Not to mention it's been a long time since my biology classes so thanks for the word which I've now learned means: "relating to the hypothetical origin of living organisms from non-living matter")
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your patronage. I promise to live up to the hopes you have for my work. Thank you.
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I have ZERO doubt!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Human biology is a difficult subject. Seriously it looks like our body is made up of mostly water. I have some granddaughters who are very good at this subject. Looks like you are, too.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Human biology is a difficult subject. Seriously it looks like our body is made up of mostly water. I have some granddaughters who are very good at this subject. Looks like you are, too.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Actually, Rosemary I'm not. You're looking at a B student's effort. (Haha) Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 2-8-2 syllable count is in good order for this contest. Each line connects well with the other. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 2-8-2 syllable count is in good order for this contest. Each line connects well with the other. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you, your words are most appreciated. I will try to improve.
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You are welcome.
Comment from papa55mike
We are nothing but water and a few chemicals and minerals that hold it all together. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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We are nothing but water and a few chemicals and minerals that hold it all together. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind words. This is a learning process for me. I'll take your appreciation as my reward. Again, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
People often become dehydrated as we need to constantly flush our bodies with clean water, a fun post and I hope you pass your exam, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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People often become dehydrated as we need to constantly flush our bodies with clean water, a fun post and I hope you pass your exam, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Actually, I took my final exam last Friday. Just a B student unfortunately. Well, when it comes to biology. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. Your poem touches on themes of evolution. I thought it was very creative. You use just a few words to touch on such a large topic. Great job - I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Nicely done. Your poem touches on themes of evolution. I thought it was very creative. You use just a few words to touch on such a large topic. Great job - I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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HAHA! I actually got a review that totally roasted me. Honestly, I accept all reviews. I kept it simple because I had no idea of what I was doing. I didn't think anyone would care much for it.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!,
I enjoyed the read , I love rain , I love the scent, the sound , the feel , the taste .
Hopefully you did better in your final biology exam because as far as this contest goes you failed to follow the requirements.
2-8-2 syllables you have 29.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Ciao!,
I enjoyed the read , I love rain , I love the scent, the sound , the feel , the taste .
Hopefully you did better in your final biology exam because as far as this contest goes you failed to follow the requirements.
2-8-2 syllables you have 29.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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HaHa! I don't even think I paid attention to the rules. I chose four words with two syllables and two with eight syllables that would make sense in a biology class. And no, I didn't do as well as I would have liked. I got a B.