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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from kahpot
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Ripples on water can be very mesmerizing, and do fade into the forever, and yet keep on repeating, an excellent haiku, I take it you may be having some rain as we are down under, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

This is a really nice poem. Colors and artwork are appropriately paired with your few words and thoughts.

A suggested alternative to your middle line might be: rings extend ripples

Mark

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark. I like it the way it is.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Oh yes!! And those raindrops in our lives can a rippling effect on our lives that goes on forever, if we allow it to. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara.

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Comment from shelley kaye
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like the R alliteration
perfect for the topic of rain dropping in puddles
great imagery and a smooth flow rippling through

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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The tiniest ripple can change the shoreline. I loved the power of this. The thought that the movement on the water goes on and on. Infinity and beyond. Beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

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    Thank you very much, Gretchen.

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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery and good sensory appeal.

I especially liked:
into forever
(Nice)

Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Margaret .

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Comment from Glenda Collins
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Very pretty writing. The presentation takes it to the next level. Truly, you have a talent for that. I need to take more time and learn to create such beautiful displays for my words. You inspire me to do so.
I enjoyed this poem, reminded me of rainy days I have enjoyed by family cabin and pond. Great memories there that I certainly carry with me.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Hello. Glenda, today's is raining hard in my town... flood warnings.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Fuller
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This is lovely! I have always found watching the ripples in a pond to be one of those fascinating things in life that makes you feel like a small speck in a giant universe. It's humbling in its simplicity and beauty.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Good metaphor... the ocean makes me feel that way.

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is very nicely done and I enjoyed reading it. I love your presentation. It's very lovely. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God truly bless you with all good things. Patricia .

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs