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Sitting Alone

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Comment from jessizero
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I agree with you! I love the picture, and I hope he gets friends. The poem said it all perfectly, and you got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing once again. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you for this great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-4-2, Sitting Alone, has the proper formatting and could be a joyful as the first cub up waiting on buddies, or the mom waiting for unsuccessful street crossers who will not arrive,

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Bill, for the great review and your nice comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Sally Law
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Teri dear,
Lovely wee poem in a most difficult form. Beautifully crafted and illustrated of the lonely raccoon, my friend.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Xos

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much Sal for this great review and your very lovely comments! love and blessings, teri
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Teri.
-The syllable count is good, along with
the topic and author notes are appreciated.
-You do a good job showing how it
would be nice if the raccoon had some friends.
-It could easily represent people and children, too.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you Pam for this great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Mar-2024
    You are very welcome, Teri.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    😊😊😊💕❤️
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Teri,
This short poem thoroughly describes the artwork. All the whorls in the artwork can be of the thoughts in this lonely looking raccoons brain.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much Joan for this great review and your very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
reply by dragonpoet on 09-Mar-2024
    You are most kindly welcome, Teri.
    Joan
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao!,

I like the painting too. And the critter does seem lonely.

That said, raccoons live quite solitary lives, they socialise during the mating season. Females might get together, and form a nursery, while they are rearing the young.

Males will mate with more than one female so they move around in their territory.


 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for the great review and for your very nice comments that were full of information I did not know! Thank you! love and blessings, Teri
reply by tempeste on 09-Mar-2024
    Wishing you a serene weekend🍀
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a neat picture. It looks like some done by an artist so we might have to depend or creator of the painting to bring him a friend. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Beth

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much Beth for this great review and your very lovely and nice comments. I always wished I could draw or paint, but not to happen for me! lol. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Animals often survive on their own and we can learn a big lesson from us to be independent in life and be self sufficient, a fine empathic post Teri, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much Dolly for the great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Hard to see this being a raccoon, but what I lack in imagination, I suspect, you made up by your clarified notes. Good luck in your quest to win-place or show. No competition from me on something this short. I am more verbose! ;-)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    lol the less I say sometimes is the best! lol Thank you for the great review and your very nice comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A perfect entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. The syllable count was met. The poem was written to accompany the artwork instead of the other way around which is interesting. I enjoyed this piece. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for the great review and your very nice comments. Blessings, Teri