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Let's Walk

2-8-2 poem

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Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your message is clear and concise. Your 2-8-2 syllable count is on point for this contest. Your picture compliments the poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

Comment from jessizero
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You did a great job with this poem. Your syllable count was correct, as well. I like the sentiment behind the poem. It was inspiring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Walking is underrated and people should do more of it. Walking is a great exercise, it is free and we get to see the sights, I do a lot of walking, love Dolly x x. x

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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This is a nice example of a 2-8-2 poem. The message is clear and can be related to. The picture chosen to accompany it fits well. I don't see the credit given for where the photo came from so you might want to add that unless I am just not seeing it. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and good presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You create a good word picture of taking a walk,
and your feet lead the way.
-I think that makes a walk more interesting
than something planned.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Nicely done. You did a wonderful job with the limitations of this poem. And your poem for me shared a message of being free. An excellent use of the format and an enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

Comment from RodG
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Walking seems to be the exercise doctors encourage all people to do at least 35 minutes a day. As the Speaker suggests, let your feet lead you where they may. Rod

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024