Spring Fever
Love is all around2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was terrific. With just eight syllables you say so much. I love "beware" as it sets a warning that yes love is in the air ... but it's not all perfect or at least that is how I read it. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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I thought this was terrific. With just eight syllables you say so much. I love "beware" as it sets a warning that yes love is in the air ... but it's not all perfect or at least that is how I read it. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Your reviews are so affirming. I almost look forward to receiving them. Many thanks, Terry.
Comment from teafor2
Terry, this compressed little gem is right on the money. A sparsity of words packing a lot. Not only enthusiastic, but nice rhyming melodious bit. The picture goes well with verbiage. A tiny fix suggested: a darker Font or make this font "Bolder." These old bad eyes wouldn't have squint:)
Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Terry, this compressed little gem is right on the money. A sparsity of words packing a lot. Not only enthusiastic, but nice rhyming melodious bit. The picture goes well with verbiage. A tiny fix suggested: a darker Font or make this font "Bolder." These old bad eyes wouldn't have squint:)
Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Many thanks. I?ll implement your helpful suggestion.
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You are welcome.