The Big Oak Tree
A memory form my younger yesrs4 total reviews
Comment from Natureschild
I love the way this story flows and the gifts bestowed by the oak tree. I think the mention of the writer's gender would help the image of the child sitting in the oak tree.
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I love the way this story flows and the gifts bestowed by the oak tree. I think the mention of the writer's gender would help the image of the child sitting in the oak tree.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
Comment from Jeano
I'll begin with since my time is limited, I've started to read all the entries in the various contests but only comment on the one I liked the best. The Big Oak Tree has my vote. Good luck with the contest.
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I'll begin with since my time is limited, I've started to read all the entries in the various contests but only comment on the one I liked the best. The Big Oak Tree has my vote. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a deeply emotional and sad story about losing your Mother when you are young and grief affects us all in different ways and you found strength in sitting under an oak tree. A very touching post.
A small edit here:
fear and pain were (churning) inside of me.
Love Dolly x x x
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This is a deeply emotional and sad story about losing your Mother when you are young and grief affects us all in different ways and you found strength in sitting under an oak tree. A very touching post.
A small edit here:
fear and pain were (churning) inside of me.
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The memory you've shared is incredibly poignant and full of raw emotion. Losing a parent at any age is a profound experience, but the way you describe it, with the immediate sense of independence and strength gained from connecting with nature, is deeply moving.
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The memory you've shared is incredibly poignant and full of raw emotion. Losing a parent at any age is a profound experience, but the way you describe it, with the immediate sense of independence and strength gained from connecting with nature, is deeply moving.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024