Out Cold
Though it was many years ago, the memory is still crisp.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a vivid memory! It's amazing how certain moments from our past can stay with us so clearly. Or at least that is how it appears reading your story. Your description really brings to life church and your friendship with Rich. I thought the writing was excellent. Loved how you ended it.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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What a vivid memory! It's amazing how certain moments from our past can stay with us so clearly. Or at least that is how it appears reading your story. Your description really brings to life church and your friendship with Rich. I thought the writing was excellent. Loved how you ended it.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting story with an intriguing punch line, and you let us hang and shaking our heads what was the story about:) Than you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Interesting story with an intriguing punch line, and you let us hang and shaking our heads what was the story about:) Than you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the read and the feedback.