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A 5-7-5 Nature Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, While, has the proper formatting, and senses the suddenly springlike observations which are the reflex action of the seasonal changes ...............
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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This 5-7-5, While, has the proper formatting, and senses the suddenly springlike observations which are the reflex action of the seasonal changes ...............
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, changing one's words to appropriately reflect the seasons - and also the seasons of life, is necessary - so we need to be flexible and adaptable. Very nice!!
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Yes, changing one's words to appropriately reflect the seasons - and also the seasons of life, is necessary - so we need to be flexible and adaptable. Very nice!!
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
That feels like a great observation about the writing life. We write and our words keep changing as we filter out what's necessary and what is not to convey what we want.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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That feels like a great observation about the writing life. We write and our words keep changing as we filter out what's necessary and what is not to convey what we want.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
Dressed as a season change, I think our writing also changes from season two season. We have many different things to draw our attention during each season and spring is one of those that is always welcome. Patric.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Dressed as a season change, I think our writing also changes from season two season. We have many different things to draw our attention during each season and spring is one of those that is always welcome. Patric.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and comparison with
words and seasons since both of them change.
-A very good concluding line showing their similarity.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and comparison with
words and seasons since both of them change.
-A very good concluding line showing their similarity.
-Well done.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from mermaids
Our words change like the seasons. Your poem shows that nature is always in transition. The seasons come and nature also changes within the seasons, storms etc take place. Your words create a picture of nature in action.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Our words change like the seasons. Your poem shows that nature is always in transition. The seasons come and nature also changes within the seasons, storms etc take place. Your words create a picture of nature in action.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yep, that is the nature of the seasons, change is very necessary, I love the image and your matching words, a fine message about not fighting change when it is inevitable, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Yep, that is the nature of the seasons, change is very necessary, I love the image and your matching words, a fine message about not fighting change when it is inevitable, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Seasons change and will dictate the way we look at life - and how we respond to these changes. We can't control times and seasons, but we can learn to flow with them.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Seasons change and will dictate the way we look at life - and how we respond to these changes. We can't control times and seasons, but we can learn to flow with them.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, Seshadri's artwork is provocative and represents the changing of the seasons while man meditates within a dome of love and happiness. I know of which you write. We as writers need to change our words and phrases to match the changing seasons.
Jesse
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Yes, Seshadri's artwork is provocative and represents the changing of the seasons while man meditates within a dome of love and happiness. I know of which you write. We as writers need to change our words and phrases to match the changing seasons.
Jesse
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Jesse, for your wonderful comments, I hope you are doing well, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Jesse
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent 5-7-5 Poem about nature. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is very pretty.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Excellent 5-7-5 Poem about nature. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is very pretty.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
