Beauty by the sea
Captured in motion2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
An ocean scene can be spectacular, but pretend the reader has no picture to help him visualize this scene. What is that "rugged beauty" we are told about? Make your imagery more concrete.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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An ocean scene can be spectacular, but pretend the reader has no picture to help him visualize this scene. What is that "rugged beauty" we are told about? Make your imagery more concrete.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Rugged beauty isRocky shores.
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Can you put those last two words in your poem?
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Thank you
Yes
Comment from Topeking
I admire the chosen picture, I love the descriptive visual writing used ,it really makes me feel like I'm at the ocean right now! The quality of the words used is really breathtaking.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I admire the chosen picture, I love the descriptive visual writing used ,it really makes me feel like I'm at the ocean right now! The quality of the words used is really breathtaking.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much