Does Anybody Care?
An entry for the club challenge15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This is a great topic for the "kimo" poetic form. It fits with the "nothing ever changes" final line. And yes, there are so many who are poor and don't have enough to eat in the world, a situation for humans in society for millennia...
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This is a great topic for the "kimo" poetic form. It fits with the "nothing ever changes" final line. And yes, there are so many who are poor and don't have enough to eat in the world, a situation for humans in society for millennia...
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a beautiful kimo poem. Three powerful lines that draw a perfect picture for the reader of what it is to be homeless and hungry. The artwork you have chosen goes very well with the poem. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is a beautiful kimo poem. Three powerful lines that draw a perfect picture for the reader of what it is to be homeless and hungry. The artwork you have chosen goes very well with the poem. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written for the club event, and I enjoyed reading it. I don't know about you, but I had to googled to find out what this particular poetry format was about and how to put it on paper. Pat.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is very well written for the club event, and I enjoyed reading it. I don't know about you, but I had to googled to find out what this particular poetry format was about and how to put it on paper. Pat.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the kimo poem" event. I never heard of it. I wonder if Shelley crested it. You take on a worthy cause. People go hungry alle over the world but especially in third world countries.
Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Excellent entry for the kimo poem" event. I never heard of it. I wonder if Shelley crested it. You take on a worthy cause. People go hungry alle over the world but especially in third world countries.
Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh a great kimo!
and question... sometimes i wonder!
excellent snapshot of our homeless situations...
smooth flow and good imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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ooh a great kimo!
and question... sometimes i wonder!
excellent snapshot of our homeless situations...
smooth flow and good imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, shelley, for leading this wonderful challenge, most enjoyable, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word
picture of this situation.
-You also do a good job with the "frozen image"
of sleeping on empty stomachs.
-A poignant closing line emphasizes how
the situation doesn't ever get better.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it and caring.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word
picture of this situation.
-You also do a good job with the "frozen image"
of sleeping on empty stomachs.
-A poignant closing line emphasizes how
the situation doesn't ever get better.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it and caring.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Pam, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I love this piece, Kahpot! I'm intrigued by the focus on writing with little movement, as I love taking snippets of time and writing about them.
This was done masterfully, and I appreciate your work.
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I love this piece, Kahpot! I'm intrigued by the focus on writing with little movement, as I love taking snippets of time and writing about them.
This was done masterfully, and I appreciate your work.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, JohnC. this was an intriguing challenge though enjoyable, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Let's hope you are wrong and that things can still change if we only put our heads and hearts together and create a world where no one is hungry or homeless. There is still a chance! I love the choice of artwork, it fits the subject so well. Sad but true this speaks about those who need our help.
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Let's hope you are wrong and that things can still change if we only put our heads and hearts together and create a world where no one is hungry or homeless. There is still a chance! I love the choice of artwork, it fits the subject so well. Sad but true this speaks about those who need our help.
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Jesse, yes, if only we/they could put their heads together and stop being political, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from XinaD
This is very touching and thought provoking. Sadly, I think there are more and more 'corners of the world' these days and not nearly enough being done about it. Thank you for bringing such an important topic to the spotlight!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is very touching and thought provoking. Sadly, I think there are more and more 'corners of the world' these days and not nearly enough being done about it. Thank you for bringing such an important topic to the spotlight!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, and yes, we do need to do a lot more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
A sad and powerful piece that highlights this stain on society. It is tragic that there are so many homeless these days. It's a problem for which there seems to be no solution.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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A sad and powerful piece that highlights this stain on society. It is tragic that there are so many homeless these days. It's a problem for which there seems to be no solution.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
