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At Peace

Kimo poem. Potlatch club

6 total reviews 
Comment from Esther Brown
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Simple but beautiful. Sometimes a picture and a few lines say best what the heart wants to express. I enjoyed this poem. I can picture the peace. Thanks for sharing. Esther

 Comment Written 21-May-2024

reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Hi Esther,
    Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. I am glad you enjoyed it.
    Joan
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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How long have you been writing to post 2000 on FanStory? Adn as an aside, I never heard of a russet sunset, as I see russet potatoes being bland in color, but maybe Kimo's have people use foreign named colors. idk
Good luck

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
    Hi Tom,
    Thanks for reading and reviewing.
    Russet is a brownish red color. I liked the way is sounded with sunset.
    Joan
Comment from lyenochka
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Congratulations on your 2000th post, Joan!
I'm glad you were so quick to do the Kimo poem. A peaceful scene it is indeed.
I had a question:
About floats quietly one lazy lake (A boat floats quietly on lazy lake?)

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thanks. Helen, on both accounts . Glad you like it. I will correct the type.
    Joan
Comment from shelley kaye
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first, congrats on post 2000!!

About floats quietly one lazy lake <-- umm... did you mean: "BOAT floats quietly ON a lazy lake" ?

other than that little spaggy... this was a great kimo with nice imagery

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Shelley for the thorough review and the congrats. I will make the edit.
    Joan
Comment from patcelaw
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Congratulations on hitting the 2000 milestone. I enjoyed reading this very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a very good weekend and may God richly bless you with all his good blessings.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Hi Patricia,
    Thanks for the congrats and the review.
    Joan
Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your milestone post! I enjoyed your poem. You got the syllable count right, and the poem suited the picture perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for the review, the congrats and all the stars, Jessie.
    Joan