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Shame and hunger

Homelessness from a privileged perspective

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Comment from Baltimore Born
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Yes, it is a problem here as well. Your poem delivers a serious message about homelessness. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. Your picture compliments the poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
    Thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Hands were made before forks it seems in this post and the homeless cannot afford the etiquette of table manners when living on the streets, a poignant post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the read miss Dolly 😁