Showing His Love
A spaceship syllable, count poem.13 total reviews
Comment from s.m.kirby
This is a nice well wrote poem. I like the style of writing. The message is so true. He will shower us with blessings once we let him in. Have a good day
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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This is a nice well wrote poem. I like the style of writing. The message is so true. He will shower us with blessings once we let him in. Have a good day
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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With gratitude in my heart and wish to thank you for a lovely review. Have a good day and God bless.
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your welcome
Comment from LateBloomer
Pat, your poem is so heartfelt and filled with high sensory appeal.
Of special note:
'Twas
when she turned
her life over to God,
He met her and saw her many needs.
(Pat, many people are waiting for God to come to them, but in reality, we need to go to Him.)
Gorgeous presentation. A thought-provoking poem. Xo. M
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Pat, your poem is so heartfelt and filled with high sensory appeal.
Of special note:
'Twas
when she turned
her life over to God,
He met her and saw her many needs.
(Pat, many people are waiting for God to come to them, but in reality, we need to go to Him.)
Gorgeous presentation. A thought-provoking poem. Xo. M
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from XinaD
The poem was beautifully written but mostly I'm commenting to thank you for sharing the spaceship format with us. I had never heard of it before but you've made it sound like quite the fun challenge and now I think I'm going to play around with it a bit. Hopefully I do the format justice, you certainly have here.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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The poem was beautifully written but mostly I'm commenting to thank you for sharing the spaceship format with us. I had never heard of it before but you've made it sound like quite the fun challenge and now I think I'm going to play around with it a bit. Hopefully I do the format justice, you certainly have here.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Baltimore Born
Yes, God is like that. He wants to meet our every need, if we let him. Your poem is well-crafted. It reads and flows well. The message is very good. Nice picture as well. Thank you.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Yes, God is like that. He wants to meet our every need, if we let him. Your poem is well-crafted. It reads and flows well. The message is very good. Nice picture as well. Thank you.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Daylily
I think you have created an excellent form and your present example is excellent. The message is a strong and is certain to be one that many readers can easily relate to. Belonging to the God of Creation is a wondrous thing, and I am so glad you shared this posting, my friend. Smiles, Lily
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I think you have created an excellent form and your present example is excellent. The message is a strong and is certain to be one that many readers can easily relate to. Belonging to the God of Creation is a wondrous thing, and I am so glad you shared this posting, my friend. Smiles, Lily
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from teafor2
Patricia, it's amazing to learn something new almost daily... Pretty soon I
won't have any room left in this mush:) Shaped poetry is challenging, but
when it works it not only looks good to the eye...The messages are nice as
well, as in the case here for the born again. teafor2
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Patricia, it's amazing to learn something new almost daily... Pretty soon I
won't have any room left in this mush:) Shaped poetry is challenging, but
when it works it not only looks good to the eye...The messages are nice as
well, as in the case here for the born again. teafor2
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I am grateful for a nice review like this. Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Amen!! Yes, when we accept God into our lives, our lives get so much better. We still will have problems, but God is there to help us through those problems. Thank you for sharing this faith poem with us.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Amen!! Yes, when we accept God into our lives, our lives get so much better. We still will have problems, but God is there to help us through those problems. Thank you for sharing this faith poem with us.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for doing such a lovely review. Appreciate it
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I've never tried writing a spaceship poem but it looks challenging. You poem was well written and flowed beautifully. You made this format look easy. Nice job.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I've never tried writing a spaceship poem but it looks challenging. You poem was well written and flowed beautifully. You made this format look easy. Nice job.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Sally Law
This is an amazing poem and form, my friend. I love form poetry but pretty much stay to teacup, nonet, and etheree. Just lovely in form and with a spiritual theme. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is an amazing poem and form, my friend. I love form poetry but pretty much stay to teacup, nonet, and etheree. Just lovely in form and with a spiritual theme. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your nice review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have heard many people say they feel this way when they first encounter deep faith, I enjoyed your fine words in your spaceship poem Patricia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I have heard many people say they feel this way when they first encounter deep faith, I enjoyed your fine words in your spaceship poem Patricia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for stopping by and my work and leaving such a nice review.
