Here comes the moon
Japanese poetry club EKPHRASTIC POEM36 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
Words an illustrations join together to form a perfect picture. Your poetic skills are clearly on point. So much so, that even without the illustration I would still manage from your words alone, to get the picture.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Words an illustrations join together to form a perfect picture. Your poetic skills are clearly on point. So much so, that even without the illustration I would still manage from your words alone, to get the picture.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Nomi, I'm honored by your kind words! Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
Beautiful, just beautiful. The wording compliments your meaning and the photo. I find nothing wrong. It sings to me. Thank you for sharing this nice write. Those Japs know how to do it.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Beautiful, just beautiful. The wording compliments your meaning and the photo. I find nothing wrong. It sings to me. Thank you for sharing this nice write. Those Japs know how to do it.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Lol Ben! Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. Could you possibly post the poetic form for the Exphrastic poem? I think I want to try this one.
The artwork you chose for this piece was lovely.
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. Could you possibly post the poetic form for the Exphrastic poem? I think I want to try this one.
The artwork you chose for this piece was lovely.
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi Patty! This was an entry for the Japanese poetry club. The prompt was to poetically describe the photo using just 15 words. :)
Comment from Kelly Hope
You write beautifully. I felt like this poem was nicely written. I will say it's undoubtedly an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing, God bless!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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You write beautifully. I felt like this poem was nicely written. I will say it's undoubtedly an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing, God bless!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Kelly, thank you so much!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Lovely! Pure, simple words that evoke such vivid images! "Ekphrastik" is such a harsh --even weird-sounding, isn't it?--- word for such a LOVELY form of poetry. You've made it into something especially excellent. xo
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Lovely! Pure, simple words that evoke such vivid images! "Ekphrastik" is such a harsh --even weird-sounding, isn't it?--- word for such a LOVELY form of poetry. You've made it into something especially excellent. xo
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hahah you crack me up. And you're RIGHT! Luckily, I can type it as if I know how to pronounce it. I'm sure I?d butcher that. lol
Thank you, my friend! Xoxo
Jess
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Same!!!!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Jessica,
I really enjoyed your ethereal poem about the light and the effect it had shining on a lake. The moon, bluish in your description, makes its way into your Ekphrastic poem.
Have a great week ahead,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi Jessica,
I really enjoyed your ethereal poem about the light and the effect it had shining on a lake. The moon, bluish in your description, makes its way into your Ekphrastic poem.
Have a great week ahead,
Rhonda
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Rhonda, thank you so much for this wonderful review. Truly appreciated!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Ulla
Oh that is just so beautiful, Jessica, and you wrote a perfect poem to go with the picture. I love Japanese poetry. This is so well written. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Oh that is just so beautiful, Jessica, and you wrote a perfect poem to go with the picture. I love Japanese poetry. This is so well written. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Ulla, thank you so much. That means a lot!
Xoxo
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Jessica, Love your expressive colorful words! You painted a beautiful image for the mind's eye to wander in. Imagery is wonderful! I think the image you chose fit your poem to a 'T"! Just had to give you six stars!
:o) Helvi2
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Hi Jessica, Love your expressive colorful words! You painted a beautiful image for the mind's eye to wander in. Imagery is wonderful! I think the image you chose fit your poem to a 'T"! Just had to give you six stars!
:o) Helvi2
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Helvi2,
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. It truly means a lot!
Xoxo
Jessica
Comment from mermaids
Your words capture the beauty of the moon and it is like the moon is a live character that appears at night. Love the line "glides on a glowing lake". It is as the moon is in motion. Excellent poetic form here that paints a picture.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Your words capture the beauty of the moon and it is like the moon is a live character that appears at night. Love the line "glides on a glowing lake". It is as the moon is in motion. Excellent poetic form here that paints a picture.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xoxo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This poem answers the club prompt well. It is a strong use of personification of both the lake and the moon.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Hi Jessica,
This poem answers the club prompt well. It is a strong use of personification of both the lake and the moon.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much, Joan xo
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You are most kindly welcome, Jessica.
Jjoan