Book of Faith
Faith Flash3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, faith is complicated. I enjoyed reading your Faith Flash contest entry. I would suggest physically putting in a space to show paragraphs. I'm sure in your original manuscript the paragraphs were there, but for FanStory you need to add the space. Good luck with the contest.
in search of lifes meaning and the knowledge of truth.The book of riddles and parables and miracles. (life's & space needed after the period)
Where scoffers may scoff, they mock,oppress and taunt. (space after the comma)
Where nothing will be concealed and nothing shall be hidden. (concealed,)
In love, in hope, in faith.Yet Satan's there without a care (space needed after the period)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Yes, faith is complicated. I enjoyed reading your Faith Flash contest entry. I would suggest physically putting in a space to show paragraphs. I'm sure in your original manuscript the paragraphs were there, but for FanStory you need to add the space. Good luck with the contest.
in search of lifes meaning and the knowledge of truth.The book of riddles and parables and miracles. (life's & space needed after the period)
Where scoffers may scoff, they mock,oppress and taunt. (space after the comma)
Where nothing will be concealed and nothing shall be hidden. (concealed,)
In love, in hope, in faith.Yet Satan's there without a care (space needed after the period)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thanks Barbera for taking time to review and pick up all my bad grammer mistakes....my worst offence....much appreciated along with your best intentions ...big thank You.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Beautiful, strong words of faith. reminding us that the darkness that surrounds us these days will be defeated in time. The artwork you chose to go with this poem is perfect. Good luck with your Faith Fiction entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Beautiful, strong words of faith. reminding us that the darkness that surrounds us these days will be defeated in time. The artwork you chose to go with this poem is perfect. Good luck with your Faith Fiction entry in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you Marilyn for your kind review...much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Even when the disciples did the work of miracles, healing the sick, the lame, raising the dead, getting excited, yet, Jesus said, don't marvel in these things, but that your names are written in heaven. Even then, Love will be the last man standing, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : written in God(')s words. 2: By God(')s grace.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Even when the disciples did the work of miracles, healing the sick, the lame, raising the dead, getting excited, yet, Jesus said, don't marvel in these things, but that your names are written in heaven. Even then, Love will be the last man standing, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : written in God(')s words. 2: By God(')s grace.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you Roy...appreciate your time thoughts. I like that "Love will be the last man standing" has nice thought to it.
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Well done
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ps...thanks for picking up my non typos...wasnt sure of the grammer..I am now ...thank you.
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Well done
