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Comment from papa55mike
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Too many people use their feelings to base their key decisions. It must be from the heart, not the gut. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
    Thank you for sharing and all the best to you. I think that feelings are important, but so is understanding and so is will (not willfulness).
Comment from derek campbell
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Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
    I do not find this poem easy to understand, even though I am the author. Maybe you have a similar experience, judging from all your question marks. Thank you and I am glad you love it.