2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gypsy, your poem is written with soft and soulful imagery.
Of special note:
in her green eyes--
his oasis
(I could feel the love within)
Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Hello Gypsy, your poem is written with soft and soulful imagery.
Of special note:
in her green eyes--
his oasis
(I could feel the love within)
Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Margaret.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Love, is a wonderful subject, and you have shown it in so few words, there definitely something about those we love, and in this case the eyes have it, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Love, is a wonderful subject, and you have shown it in so few words, there definitely something about those we love, and in this case the eyes have it, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very heady poem. I could picture a desert setting in the morning. The sun coming up, tinting everything with a rosy hue. Then the reflection of this scene in the eyes of his beloved. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This was a very heady poem. I could picture a desert setting in the morning. The sun coming up, tinting everything with a rosy hue. Then the reflection of this scene in the eyes of his beloved. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Ulla. (*÷*)
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem and the entire presentation are sweetly romantic and extremely innocent. Yet, passion evolves from it. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This poem and the entire presentation are sweetly romantic and extremely innocent. Yet, passion evolves from it. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
sweetly romantic
love the contrast between desert and green
and the satori is perfect!
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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sweetly romantic
love the contrast between desert and green
and the satori is perfect!
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like your 3-4-4 poem. I like that he sees an oasis in his beloved's eyes. And in her eyes is reflected the beauty of the desert dawn. I wondered at first if this was going to be 2-4-2 entry like:
desert
sun rises in
her eyes
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I like your 3-4-4 poem. I like that he sees an oasis in his beloved's eyes. And in her eyes is reflected the beauty of the desert dawn. I wondered at first if this was going to be 2-4-2 entry like:
desert
sun rises in
her eyes
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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It's not for a contest but I did write another one for it.
Thank you, big sister ❤️ you're the best.
Love
Marival
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Each line connecting with the next well. The last line sums up the poem well. Good complimentary picture. Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Each line connecting with the next well. The last line sums up the poem well. Good complimentary picture. Nice job.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs