Shimmering Ring
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Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the syllable count and rhymes. Your poem was very effective, bringing to mind a wedding ring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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You did a great job with the syllable count and rhymes. Your poem was very effective, bringing to mind a wedding ring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Women do love their shimmering rings as they symbolise their love devotion. I suggest you lighten your words here as this is difficult to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Women do love their shimmering rings as they symbolise their love devotion. I suggest you lighten your words here as this is difficult to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Jeano
1-6-1 Rhyming romance poem. It sounded easy but I kicked it around a while and then thought it was too much exercise for my brain. Might have been my mood talking. You did a great job, and are getting my vote. What's more romantic than a beautiful ring.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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1-6-1 Rhyming romance poem. It sounded easy but I kicked it around a while and then thought it was too much exercise for my brain. Might have been my mood talking. You did a great job, and are getting my vote. What's more romantic than a beautiful ring.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Michael Cassar
Quickly, this prompt poem brings to light to object of its ring. A ring, maybe also a watch, engulfed in the memory of receiving. It still shimmers in the heart of the receiver. It possesses so much affectionate value, that the call for a 1-6-1 poem immediately came to mind. Beautiful sentimental poem
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Quickly, this prompt poem brings to light to object of its ring. A ring, maybe also a watch, engulfed in the memory of receiving. It still shimmers in the heart of the receiver. It possesses so much affectionate value, that the call for a 1-6-1 poem immediately came to mind. Beautiful sentimental poem
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from shelley kaye
cute. your wedding ring? nice and sparkly...
good poem for the 1-6-1 rhyme contest
smooth flow and nice imagery
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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cute. your wedding ring? nice and sparkly...
good poem for the 1-6-1 rhyme contest
smooth flow and nice imagery
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you yes it?s my wedding rings 🙂
Comment from derek campbell
Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks
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Thank you so much
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-written poem. Your 1-6-1 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. The poem reads and flows well. Good complimentary picture. Nice job.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is a well-written poem. Your 1-6-1 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. The poem reads and flows well. Good complimentary picture. Nice job.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much
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You are welcome.
Comment from papa55mike
I've read several of these entries today and I like this one. We all need some bling. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I've read several of these entries today and I like this one. We all need some bling. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Mike 🙂