Comment from
Baltimore Born
This is a nice poem. Your 1-6-1 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. The message is clear in this poem. Good complimentary picture. Nice job.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
Thank you. Your rating and encouraging comments are most appreciated.
reply by Baltimore Born on 01-Mar-2024
Comment from
Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Powerful Force, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that wind can move your hair, float a kite, and rip one's house out of the ground.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
Thank you for your comments and the rating.