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Your love...

1-6-1 poem

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Comment from patcelaw
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I wish you the very best in the contest and I wish you a good day. May you have a blessed day and may you find it people who love you hard loving you with a pure heart. Patricia .

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024

Comment from Elise H
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I love the play on "pure" and "lure." It works both as a rhyme and as strong juxtaposition. This was a clever poem and I really liked it. Thanks for sharing! I haven't seen this form before.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024