Spooky Wild-eyed Land
A poem about when I lived along the Rio Grande River2 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Changing stars to five. Four was a mistake. This is a well written free form poem for the challenge. I enjoyed the full imagery and descriptions. It is quite a story you share. I've hardly even traveled out of NYC and NY. lol WE are now in Western PA.
Best wishes,
Alex
Possible typo fix:
was right not (to) trust in that untrusting land
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Changing stars to five. Four was a mistake. This is a well written free form poem for the challenge. I enjoyed the full imagery and descriptions. It is quite a story you share. I've hardly even traveled out of NYC and NY. lol WE are now in Western PA.
Best wishes,
Alex
Possible typo fix:
was right not (to) trust in that untrusting land
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
Comment from John Ciarmello
I enjoyed this poem, Robert. It seemed to bounce along quite nicely, and I mean that in a good way.
It sounds like it wasn't the most welcoming place you had ever lived. I
I'm a big fan of free verse, and this was well done! Best, JohnC
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I enjoyed this poem, Robert. It seemed to bounce along quite nicely, and I mean that in a good way.
It sounds like it wasn't the most welcoming place you had ever lived. I
I'm a big fan of free verse, and this was well done! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
