2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
What a beautiful lullaby/prayer. The imagery it wonderful. I could see the wooden horses, purple rain, and the little boat. Again, thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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What a beautiful lullaby/prayer. The imagery it wonderful. I could see the wooden horses, purple rain, and the little boat. Again, thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
This is beautiful, I can imagine many little ones enjoying and falling asleep hearing these wonderful words, an excellent suite of haikus, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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This is beautiful, I can imagine many little ones enjoying and falling asleep hearing these wonderful words, an excellent suite of haikus, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy. Nice
This Haiku Suite is well presented and compliments your image and makes one create these images in mind during their reading
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy. Nice
This Haiku Suite is well presented and compliments your image and makes one create these images in mind during their reading
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of alliteration and bits of childhood songs like "Hush Little Baby" and maybe "Purple Rain" but that's by Prince. Anyway, a great way to conjure up a soothing feeling!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Great use of alliteration and bits of childhood songs like "Hush Little Baby" and maybe "Purple Rain" but that's by Prince. Anyway, a great way to conjure up a soothing feeling!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
full of purple rain
that fall <-- i think fall needs to be fallS
this makes me think of the song silent lucidity for some reason...
wonderful imagery of sailing away on an ocean of stars... nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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full of purple rain
that fall <-- i think fall needs to be fallS
this makes me think of the song silent lucidity for some reason...
wonderful imagery of sailing away on an ocean of stars... nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Shelley, I corrected it. Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. Very well written. The pictures are so neat. The bottom picture is beautiful. I like the words you use. Great job on this . I look the colors you use on words
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. Very well written. The pictures are so neat. The bottom picture is beautiful. I like the words you use. Great job on this . I look the colors you use on words
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Heather Knight
This is sooo beautiful! And I like it even more now because it makes me think of Annie.
I have to relearn all the nursery rhymes I read to the kids because I've forgotten many of them.
xxx
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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This is sooo beautiful! And I like it even more now because it makes me think of Annie.
I have to relearn all the nursery rhymes I read to the kids because I've forgotten many of them.
xxx
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Heather 😊 I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs