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Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Never any excuse for abusing someone. Does seem when someone is famous certain other less desirable qualities about them tend to get "overlooked" so to say.

Dahmer was a case study in psychosis, to say the least. One who feasted on his victims. Have heard human flesh tastes like chicken. Would not know. You are the doctor, perhaps you could enlighten on that topic?

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
    The Odor of fresh living flesh smells beefy.
    As for Tast??
    Cannibalism is still prevelant but rare in third indigenous tribes mmmm .,.....
    Thanks Brett
    Doctor Ric...

Comment from Douglas Goff
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Long but interesting, Doc. It seems you had a lot of time to reflect while incarcerated.

Those dumped babies stories are always awful. Adoption is the solution.


Good stuff.
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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
    And thank you Douglas it was a very deep end needed subject to be brought forward.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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thank you for sharing. This is a very interesting read.

Note: This book )along with Eleven other's) were entirely written in Seventeen days. (Note: This book (along with Eleven other's) were entirely written in Seventeen days.)

And of course she was also accountable as a Cannibal!! (Jeffrey Dahmer was a male, so 'And course, he was)

Yes he would do this to see what makes his victim tick! (Yes,)

Note: Criminals have been known to stand in line.
the firing line) (the??

As the story progressed this lost man must have had issues with his father or mother . (comma after 'progressed' & move period closer to 'mother.')

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thanks again for your review and help Barbara.
    Doctor Ricky