School snow, Home snow
The difference between cold at school and cold at play2 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
I liked your approach, and the rhyming was really good. I certainly got the picture and sounds like it was a lot of fun despite the cold. Oh, and there is nothing wrong with a few ciders now and then even at your young age.
All the best.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I liked your approach, and the rhyming was really good. I certainly got the picture and sounds like it was a lot of fun despite the cold. Oh, and there is nothing wrong with a few ciders now and then even at your young age.
All the best.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it
Comment from Sueswrite
Written quite nicely, and joyfully presented, the visual clearly defined a different typical snow day in comparison to my own memories. It is exciting and interesting learning about other, "Typicals" stored in the memories of those in different parts of our world. Splendid photo to accompany your writing! Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Written quite nicely, and joyfully presented, the visual clearly defined a different typical snow day in comparison to my own memories. It is exciting and interesting learning about other, "Typicals" stored in the memories of those in different parts of our world. Splendid photo to accompany your writing! Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks for nice review, glad you enjoyed it.
