Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Beautiful, with such passion the eyes can light fires, and reveal our true feelings, love the connection between the eyes, and the soul, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, kym.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Very passionate poem. I love how the love is kindled by simply looking in your lovers eyes. I could see the imagery of the flames reflected in their eyes. Great romantic and sensual poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024

Thank you very much Gretchen.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool pic and cool descriptions
love the "the sun rising in your soul" part
great imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley.

Gypsy

Comment from Elise H

Excellent

Hi there. I love ekphrastic poetry and this is the first one I've found since stumbling onto this site a few days ago. Thanks for sharing!

I like how you worked the color into your poem too, making it part of the overall art work. It felt cohesive matched your chosen picture well.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Elise. Welcome to fanstory, let me know if you need help.

Gypsy