2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy. Lol. I love this little poem. Of special note:
turtle's long-term goal
(At least the turtle has a goal. That's more than some people--sad but true.)
Well done. A fun poem. Awesome artwork choice. Xo. M
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy. Lol. I love this little poem. Of special note:
turtle's long-term goal
(At least the turtle has a goal. That's more than some people--sad but true.)
Well done. A fun poem. Awesome artwork choice. Xo. M
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Margaret.
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Comment from kahpot
So very well written and presented, love your Satori, it made me smile, as it relates to the turtle race, and I can imagine the turtle wondering how they are going to complete the journey****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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So very well written and presented, love your Satori, it made me smile, as it relates to the turtle race, and I can imagine the turtle wondering how they are going to complete the journey****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, kym.
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Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your haiku.
The imagery is clear and there's much to be taken from your words.
- The feeling of hope
_ The message of self belief
- The acknowledging of what appears insignificant to one person can be a huge deal to another.
Best wishes as always, Debra
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your haiku.
The imagery is clear and there's much to be taken from your words.
- The feeling of hope
_ The message of self belief
- The acknowledging of what appears insignificant to one person can be a huge deal to another.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review.
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Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Yes, it's all a matter of perspective! A "short path" is a turtle's or snail's lifetime long term goal! A cute poem that has a message for all of us. Enjoyed your haiku!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Lol. Yes, it's all a matter of perspective! A "short path" is a turtle's or snail's lifetime long term goal! A cute poem that has a message for all of us. Enjoyed your haiku!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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LoL a silly poem. Thank you for reviewing it.
Love
Marival
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Do like your contrast between the turtle's long-term crawl around the small pond. Good imagery with koi! Photo illustration and font color choice complement your total presentation.
Mark
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Gypsy,
Do like your contrast between the turtle's long-term crawl around the small pond. Good imagery with koi! Photo illustration and font color choice complement your total presentation.
Mark
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your time.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
huh i like the contradiction of short path and a turtle's long term goal -
totally cool pic - that turtle looks very proud of himself!
a great haiku
good imagery
smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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huh i like the contradiction of short path and a turtle's long term goal -
totally cool pic - that turtle looks very proud of himself!
a great haiku
good imagery
smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Delightful haiku, Gypsy!
I can visualize that little turtle's journey...even if our pond still has frozen leaves covering it.
C'mon spring!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Delightful haiku, Gypsy!
I can visualize that little turtle's journey...even if our pond still has frozen leaves covering it.
C'mon spring!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Diane.
Gypsy
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The wording is very good. The way you color the words is a nice touch. Also the pictures are perfect for the poem. Great job
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. The wording is very good. The way you color the words is a nice touch. Also the pictures are perfect for the poem. Great job
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much.
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