Let Go
Let Go2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
You do a wonderful job with the dialogue. You share the intense and emotionally charged conversation between Annie and Donnie, I love how you reveal a toxic and abusive relationship. The dialogue is well done. Not sure you need the ALL CAPS though as your emotions get through just fine. This is well written. It's real. Great job! I enjoyed reading your story.
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You do a wonderful job with the dialogue. You share the intense and emotionally charged conversation between Annie and Donnie, I love how you reveal a toxic and abusive relationship. The dialogue is well done. Not sure you need the ALL CAPS though as your emotions get through just fine. This is well written. It's real. Great job! I enjoyed reading your story.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
Comment from Elise H
Hi there, thanks for sharing your story. I liked how tension-filled it was and that, using only dialogue, the dynamics between the characters were clearly established.
For me, the excessive punctuation and capitalization detracted from the story. I think part of the challenge of writing a dialogue-only story is figuring out the exact right word choice to convey strong emotions. Personally, I find using punctuation like "?!" and "..." so often distracting.
Thanks again for sharing, and have a wonderful Saturday.
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Hi there, thanks for sharing your story. I liked how tension-filled it was and that, using only dialogue, the dynamics between the characters were clearly established.
For me, the excessive punctuation and capitalization detracted from the story. I think part of the challenge of writing a dialogue-only story is figuring out the exact right word choice to convey strong emotions. Personally, I find using punctuation like "?!" and "..." so often distracting.
Thanks again for sharing, and have a wonderful Saturday.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
