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Naked Before the Stars

Thirteenth song for FAWM

2 total reviews 
Comment from Mia Twysted
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These lyrics were peaceful and brought a calmness to the reader. I can only imagine how powerful it could be with music and an amazing singer belting out the words.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is wonderful. It shares a place where the secrets of the universe can be seen with tarot cards. I love the repetition of "Naked before the stars". I can feel vulnerability as I read this. Great job - this was so creative and very enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024