Plop
On a walk, anything might happen.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That's what birdies do! It is meant to be lucky, but if a pigeon drops poop into your eye it could blind you! A fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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That's what birdies do! It is meant to be lucky, but if a pigeon drops poop into your eye it could blind you! A fun post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback. I'm just glad that elephants don't fly.
Comment from Gunner Lil
You got the 5-7-5 right on the head.
A very good picture also.
An easy read with humor as well.
A nice flow with good pace for this short poem.
Good job.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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You got the 5-7-5 right on the head.
A very good picture also.
An easy read with humor as well.
A nice flow with good pace for this short poem.
Good job.
Thank you!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the read and review and be careful out there.