Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Life's Twisted Road - Chapter 26"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
16 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
The girls are a neat twist to the story. I hope they get out of their mess in one piece. I have spent the whole day hacking and coughing. I'm taking a ton of meds and hope they start working soon.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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The girls are a neat twist to the story. I hope they get out of their mess in one piece. I have spent the whole day hacking and coughing. I'm taking a ton of meds and hope they start working soon.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I'm so sorry to hear you are so sick, April. Please take care of yourself so it doesn't develop into something far worse. Thank you for reading another chapter.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Oh nooooo! Natasha has brought her low life and trouble to her grandmother's house. I wasn't expecting any of this. How do you think this stuff up? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Oh nooooo! Natasha has brought her low life and trouble to her grandmother's house. I wasn't expecting any of this. How do you think this stuff up? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Good morning,Lorraine
It pains me to say that the characters are drawn from my life... This story has been a form of therapy for me to deal with my chaotic family. We're estranged now but the problems still rattle around my head. Thus I wrote a story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This chapter is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you very very best with all of your writing and especially I wish you the best for your book. May you have a wonderful week. Patricia .
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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This chapter is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you very very best with all of your writing and especially I wish you the best for your book. May you have a wonderful week. Patricia .
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Good morning -
My apologies for responding so late, but life got in the way the last few days. I appreciate your kindness and review and am happy that you are still enjoying the story. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
At least Juan wasn't a total mess. He tried to save them, but Big Frank must have had him beat again to learn their address. The end rather confused me. Becky recognized Big Frank's bodyguard in the car. Then they see Big Frank walking toward the house. Who screamed? Not them. Was there another person who entered the house without making any noise?
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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At least Juan wasn't a total mess. He tried to save them, but Big Frank must have had him beat again to learn their address. The end rather confused me. Becky recognized Big Frank's bodyguard in the car. Then they see Big Frank walking toward the house. Who screamed? Not them. Was there another person who entered the house without making any noise?
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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The bodyguard walked toward the house and pointed his gun at the window....thus Becky screamed, fearing he was about to shoot. It was just a scare tactic... Big Frank was watching through the open car window. Hope that clears it up.
Smiles, Carol
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The reader is in the room with the girls so you probably need to say Becky screamed.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You left a great hook here. I really enjoyed reading. These girls aren't getting out of this easily and I'm not sure Jackson will be able to help them.
Natasha looked at the nervous guy standing next to her.( standing beside her.)
the guy spoke to Juan. "Either (Juan,)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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You left a great hook here. I really enjoyed reading. These girls aren't getting out of this easily and I'm not sure Jackson will be able to help them.
Natasha looked at the nervous guy standing next to her.( standing beside her.)
the guy spoke to Juan. "Either (Juan,)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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I'm not sure anyone can help these girls! thanks so much for reading and the review. I'm thrilled to know you enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, they didn't quit making guns when they made Big Frank's. We just have to always remember to shoot first. LOL. And with a name like BIG, it's always two to the chest and one to the head. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Well, they didn't quit making guns when they made Big Frank's. We just have to always remember to shoot first. LOL. And with a name like BIG, it's always two to the chest and one to the head. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Yes, Big Frank resembles "The Fridge" ...broad shoulders, broad body, broad everything. Like a steam roller!
Smiles, Carol
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I resemble Frank's description. I used to wear a 64 sports coat, but age, gravity, and muscle loss have taken me down to a 56-58. And my 30 inch waste has ballooned to 38. LOL. :-)
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I cannot wait to see what happens next. I do not see any need for improvement. I am glad you are posting chapters frequently. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. I cannot wait to see what happens next. I do not see any need for improvement. I am glad you are posting chapters frequently. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Good morning -
My apologies for responding so late, but life got in the way the last few days. I appreciate your kindness and review and am happy that you are still enjoying the story. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I not sure I remember why Big Frank wants to hurt these girls. This is intense. They are fortunate they got away from the party. I was surprised that Juan was concerned enough with their safety to try to get them out. Now it seems this is involving Isabella as well since they are at her house.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I not sure I remember why Big Frank wants to hurt these girls. This is intense. They are fortunate they got away from the party. I was surprised that Juan was concerned enough with their safety to try to get them out. Now it seems this is involving Isabella as well since they are at her house.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Big Frank saw the girls on the night at the Qwik Trip. He's covering his bases with Juan and doesn't want some teenage girls messing things up. Juan knows his life and theirs could easily be on the line. The gun was just a warning to scare the girls which it accomplished.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh for heavens sake! That Natasha really hasn't got a brain, has she. I feel sorry for Isabella, this is her home that Big Frank is going to shoot at! I wonder why he bothered to come after them, I don't think he saw them at the party. I'll have to go and read the next part ASAP! Great writing again, my friend. Loving this story, but my blood pressure isn't doing so good!!!! Lol. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Oh for heavens sake! That Natasha really hasn't got a brain, has she. I feel sorry for Isabella, this is her home that Big Frank is going to shoot at! I wonder why he bothered to come after them, I don't think he saw them at the party. I'll have to go and read the next part ASAP! Great writing again, my friend. Loving this story, but my blood pressure isn't doing so good!!!! Lol. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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It's a small town and rumors fly. I think Frank is concerned small fry Juan might share too much with his new friends. He was leaving a warning of sorts to scare the girls. No shooting, thank heavens.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
What are the girls going to do now? With Frank fast closing and poor Isabella in the house, I wonder what will bring the dangerous things forth, I think this is here now, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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What are the girls going to do now? With Frank fast closing and poor Isabella in the house, I wonder what will bring the dangerous things forth, I think this is here now, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I think Frank was warning the girls..open their mouths and next time it won't be just a threat. Trouble's brewing though.
Thanks so much for your kindness and review.
Smiles, Carole
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Most welcome