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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Our Life Together "
A book of my Love poems.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Douglas Goff
This contained awesome and skilled descriptive talents exuding skill and tapestry painted by the written word.
Most enjoyable. I had to six star this with my Saturday sixer! Well deserved, Doc.
Douglas
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
Always a pleasure and thanks for the review.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I will certainly pray for Dawna. God can work miracles.
And yes,she's the wind in my sin. (space needed after the comma)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
Thanks and time will tell all
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
Elise H
This was an interesting poem for a few reason. Number one, it reminded me a little of one of the Foo Fighters' new songs with the repetition of shame, which I liked a lot. The beginning few lines were a little off for me. I think adding a noun or pronoun when talking about the person would help the flow of the beginning section. Right now it trips up my tongue a bit in a way I am not sure is intentional. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
Thanks for your time and review and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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