My Heart Sings
An eight word poem.3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Love is such a wonderful emotion and having our heart sing is when love is at it's best. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
Love is such a wonderful emotion and having our heart sing is when love is at it's best. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your comments on my poem. I apologize for not getting back to you sooner but I work across two devices which aren't totally compatible.
Comment from jessizero
I agree that this is an expression of joy and love. I might add a comma after "you," but that's not necessary. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
I agree that this is an expression of joy and love. I might add a comma after "you," but that's not necessary. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the rating and your review. I just went back and added the comma as you suggested.
Comment from mermaids
Your eight words do capture a feeling of love and romance. You have created a one line poem of the heart. You did well coming up with eight words, not an easy feat.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
Your eight words do capture a feeling of love and romance. You have created a one line poem of the heart. You did well coming up with eight words, not an easy feat.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your rating and your comments.